Friday, August 28, 2020

Time... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time...
Time just slips through my fingers.
It is never, never enough.
It is fleetingly my friend,
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 29 August 2020

It's definitely a never enough time inspired ten from me!

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Dominic Windram 29 August 2020

Absoultely Shaun. When I worked as a tutor in my local college, management was forever telling us to be creative with our time which is basically a euphemism to get as much done as possible without taking time to reflect on what one is doing. Thankfully, now I have more time to prepare properly and if pupil/student happiness and results are anything to go by I'm glad I chose my current path. Nevertheless, it is amazing how time creeps up on us...it will soon be Christmas!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 August 2020

A marvelous and insightful write. Time has its own course Its hands never stop for anyone. We are its followers. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed poem. To my Poem List.

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Soran M. H 28 August 2020

Time just slips through my fingers. It is never, never enough.

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Soran M. H 28 August 2020

the time is a huge secret, many philosophers tried to understanding it, but the mystery still there and it is passing so quick nowadays, 10+ and onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 28 August 2020

well done, this amazing poem reminding me with A Dream Within a Dream by EDGAR ALLAN POE: I hold within my hand Grains of the golden sand — How few! yet how they creep Through my fingers to the deep, While I weep — while I weep! O God! Can I not grasp Them with a tighter clasp?

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Leeann Azzopardi 28 August 2020

I belieeve I wrote something like this for Sunday. Please check anything you haven't read and comment I would like to hear from you. I'll see ya Sunday

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