Monday, March 18, 2019

Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is the concept of time?
The clock dial spins on repeat in a circular motion every 24 stops, and
I can hear it tick and tock
In the morning the sun rises, and at night it falls
...
Read full text

Lily Ives
COMMENTS
Alison Mujati 23 September 2020

You writing is too good to ignore Lily. May I add you to my friends here

0 0 Reply
Mahtab Bangalee 18 March 2019

beautiful poetic expression on existence in time

0 0 Reply
Geoffrey Fafard 18 March 2019

Great write... fresh and different...love the line - " I notice my face blooms new shadows." How very eloquent..Cheers Geoffrey.

0 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 March 2019

An excellently crafted poem, dear Ma'am Lily....10+++++++++

0 0 Reply
Ruta Mohapatra 18 March 2019

'I still can't shake the feeling that I am eternal'.......Beautiful line!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success