Its like the worlds stopped turning
Without you by my side
But then I look and wonder
At the changing countryside
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Losing one near and dear is a tragic experience and the thought of the beloved person resurfaces during both on happy and sombre occassions. This aspect has been encapsuled beautifully in this Beautifully poem.
A beautifully narrated longing for the loved one. Heartiest congrats on the member poem of the day.
How beautiful! But also tragically sad. Missing someone is the worst thing ever... Love this poem :)
Many congrats on the honour you received today, Alison! I hope you'll be online to see your poem get recognised!
Wow, what a surprise... Poem of the day! I feel quite proud of myself, but sad at the same time, think Steve could be watching over me! ! Thanks for your comments
Rainbow lights the sky and loss we bear in time does not come back. We should hold present moment carefully and work accordingly. This reminds importance of time and relationship. An amazing poem is shared here. Congratulations! ...10
Reminds me of the song TIME popularized by ALAN PARSONS PROJECT... Congrats on being chosen...
This is how the loss of somebody very close to you changes everything including time. Thanks, Alison. The bright colours of the Summer Give way to Autumns bronze and gold
Thank you for your comments. Sometimes its easier to look back than forward but forward we must go! !
Alison, this heart-felt poem is a beautiful way to honour the memory of a dearly departed one. I love the way that you have incorporated Mother Nature into the poem. Beautiful vivid imagery. Job well done. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.
Thank you for your lovely comments about my poem. You may also like my poem 'Stars'
Beautifully reassuring poem. Love never dies. Memories never die. Thank you for the positive reminder!
This is such a beautiful memorial to one lost.