Thursday, March 9, 2017

Time Comments

Rating: 4.9

Its like the worlds stopped turning
Without you by my side
But then I look and wonder
At the changing countryside
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Alison Gaff
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Mj Lemon 05 April 2017

This is such a beautiful memorial to one lost.

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Rajesh Thankappan 05 April 2017

Losing one near and dear is a tragic experience and the thought of the beloved person resurfaces during both on happy and sombre occassions. This aspect has been encapsuled beautifully in this Beautifully poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 April 2017

A beautifully narrated longing for the loved one. Heartiest congrats on the member poem of the day.

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Julie Smith 05 April 2017

How beautiful! But also tragically sad. Missing someone is the worst thing ever... Love this poem :)

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Many thanks for your lovely comments

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Practicing Poetess 05 April 2017

Many congrats on the honour you received today, Alison! I hope you'll be online to see your poem get recognised!

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Wow, what a surprise... Poem of the day! I feel quite proud of myself, but sad at the same time, think Steve could be watching over me! ! Thanks for your comments

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2017

Loss! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 April 2017

Rainbow lights the sky and loss we bear in time does not come back. We should hold present moment carefully and work accordingly. This reminds importance of time and relationship. An amazing poem is shared here. Congratulations! ...10

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Thank you for your lovely kind comments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 April 2017

Reminds me of the song TIME popularized by ALAN PARSONS PROJECT... Congrats on being chosen...

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Rajnish Manga 05 April 2017

This is how the loss of somebody very close to you changes everything including time. Thanks, Alison. The bright colours of the Summer Give way to Autumns bronze and gold

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Thank you for your comments. Sometimes its easier to look back than forward but forward we must go! !

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Richard Wlodarski 05 April 2017

Alison, this heart-felt poem is a beautiful way to honour the memory of a dearly departed one. I love the way that you have incorporated Mother Nature into the poem. Beautiful vivid imagery. Job well done. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Thank you for your lovely comments about my poem. You may also like my poem 'Stars'

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Alison Gaff 05 April 2017

Thank you for your lovely comments, you may also like my poem 'Stars'

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Practicing Poetess 13 March 2017

Beautifully reassuring poem. Love never dies. Memories never die. Thank you for the positive reminder!

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Tom Allport 09 March 2017

a sad poem of the loss of a loved one, well written.

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Alison Gaff

Alison Gaff

Surrey, England
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