Time
Time's running out,
Increasingly depleted day by day,
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Truly, time is running out! Just teaches us to do the right things at right time. Thoughtful and powerful four liner poem. Congratulations Christopher!
A Very Deep, Powerful Poem! ! ! ! ! We Need To Appreciate the moments, the seconds, Beauty/Gift Of Life, Because It Flashes By Ever So Fast! ! ! ! ! And Life And Love Are So Dear! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Congratulations On Poem Of The Day! ! ! ! !
The question is, Who's time is running out? If it's merging into eons, there doesn't appear to be an end to time. I like your oxymoron: Increasingly depleted... but the logic of the poem doesn't work. Thanks for sharing.
Yes, time flows non-stop. No breaks.... No pause button. Each passing moment flows into a larger ocean of timelessness. Lovely poem. Thanks.
Time is running faster and faster while lifespan is shorter and shorter.Beautiful poem on time and life. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for the poem of the day.
Yeah, time and tide wait for none. its go by seconds, minutes, hours...... never to return. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
So what happens once time runs out? The postulation that time is finite binds existence between the confines of a beginning and an end. The poem sets out time as a linear phenomenon with measurable increments that will eventually come to an end. What then? That's the interesting part as far as I'm concerned. Although within the grand sweep of time, even if it is a quantifiable sum, my fleeting concerns won't even register as a measurable blip. And now it is time I move on to doing something more constructive.
a wonderful poem that will stand the test? albeit only in our time! ..............well penned CT.
You are clever one! from first line..you do a statement, a reminder...second line you expand it with details, third you bold it even more and the last one, it just burst to be big view...as if it was observed by time keeper! loved it.
Yes, time does not wait for anyone.. Increasingly depleted day by day....wise expression...good poem
Indeed, we have limited time!