Monday, January 25, 2016

Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

If I could hold time, I would walk in a circle around you while nobody watched.

In the park the music would cease, and all those dancing eyes would stare vacantly into the river sky, for a moment set aside for us.
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Tessa Roods
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Anne Séité 04 February 2016

nice idea, and put into words well, Anne S.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 02 February 2016

yes that's the point we can't hold time even for a milli second....nicely composed lines

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Soul Watcher 26 January 2016

Very nice and well done

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Sofia Kioroglou 25 January 2016

Beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it!

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