Monday, November 23, 2015

Time Comments

Rating: 4.7

Endless seems the time
of the sundial on the
hot, delapidated wall.
The lizard lies lazily
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Eva Beylich
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Howard Savage 22 January 2016

Time does seems endless, and I believe it is.

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Manonton Dalan 03 January 2016

time whoever invented time must be genius or wine maker

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 January 2016

Beautiful lines , Hasty footsteps leave The past in order to Flee into the limited future Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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R B Seals 15 December 2015

Eva, your poem conjures up a curious set of images that truly influences one's concept of time: endless and mindless in its pursuits and its insistence, and ever elusive as it stands watch over History’s depiction of the past and Creation’s design of a future wholly beyond the limits of our imagination. Thank you, Eva and best wishes for success in all your endeavors. [8.0]

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