Tuesday, September 29, 2015

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“Who are you? ” Time asks me with a sigh,
And my family tree echoes with a loud cry!
I feel sick to my stomach and I feel blue…
I answer as I tremble: “I wish I knew.”
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Liza Sudina 29 September 2015

My rhythm & rhyme lack its Golden Section I wish I was Antonio Salieri… At least Salieri crossed path with a genius good poem! love longing for ideal. saint especially!

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Leaking Pen 21 October 2015

Thanks Liza for taking the time to read and comment on my poem Truly Paul

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