Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Time Comments

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Time's just like a circle
Round & round it goes
With neither a beginning or an ending
Bound on bound it goes
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Seema Jayaraman
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Stephani Kievaughan 15 September 2015

12 years old you say and you were pondering the trappings of time. yes yes a wisdom of Lives gone past surely resides in the Soul of Such as You. Wisdom greater than the throngs of Humanity often spring forth from the spiritual wisdom of the Child. when their innocence dares with a boldness to speak the truth. never to be tamped down by the trappings of the society. bound in their concrete sediment of Norms, and standards of their state of being trapped. likened unto a pebble in the oldest Concrete.

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Seema Jayaraman 08 September 2015

Not bad for a 12 year old, written in the era of library books as the only accessory for creativity...I must have written this in 1983 or 84, pardon the errors and simplicity, but a poetess was definitely hiding inside. Best regards Seema

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