Tuesday, November 11, 2014

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Time the cruel robber,
You took shines of her hairs,
You took brightness of her eyes,
Pink color from her cheeks,
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Khalid Saifullah 04 January 2018

Yes, time is cruel it does not love anyone.

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Kirti Sharma 16 November 2014

can not stop smilin... its such a nice poem! ! i like it! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2014

Very nice - Time the cruel robber, You took shines of her hairs, thanks for share

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Valsa George 11 November 2014

Take it if you can! You are a failure as a robber! ! It is with great confidence that you challenge Time! Yes, time can steal many things, but cannot rob away the love if it is steadfast! Great write! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 11 November 2014

You shall fly and fly, On The Milky Ways! ! ....................time is really a robber......................nice....

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 November 2014

A beautiful poem........10

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