Monday, July 21, 2014

Time! Comments

Rating: 4.5

How long do I keep on grieving for I haven't
got a clue. Is there a special time that draws
it to a close. Is there a time to stop this hurting,
for they say my pain will ease, in time I'll start my
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Steve Ricketts
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Achill Lad 08 September 2014

A heartfelt, poignant narrative. Time will definitely ease your pain, but it won't erase the memory. A good read. Well done.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 September 2014

A touching 'missing u' poem and i admire the sincere lyrical wording and emotion here. Keep writin. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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