Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Tim Tebow Poem = Noah's Ark, David And Goliath & Jesus Comments

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God saw that wickedness had fouled his earth
To a state it could no longer be ignored.
While grieving sadly He chose to destroy it
Though Noah found grace in the eyes of the Lord.
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Carsten Thomsen 07 February 2012

..a childrens story put into poetry. as for the poem. nice work with the end rhymes in the last 2/3

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Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.please read some of mine.

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