Tilti Comments

.........and is that why you made Life your Wife (in another poem) . This is a hilarious piece, ode! Lively, beautiful words, fast also.

Love and its give and take confusing dance of life...another ten.

its nice rhythm and beautiful piece espically the first lines i like it soo much

When I wrote this poem, this is the first poem I wrote in English, I was in full state of love, it springs of the bottom of my heart.