Monday, January 30, 2006
Tilt-A-Whirl Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Do you know how I just felt
A notch in your belt
A name on your list
To Hell with it all, now I’m just pissed
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Poetry Hound
30 January 2006
I love the title and its metaphor for your relationship with this person. However, emotional pain caused by a lover is probably the number one subject of poems here, so I think I would have tried to make the poem even more original and clever. Regards.
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/20/2025 2:32:56 AM # 1.0.0
Good choice of phrasing. I like the way you can pull me into this poem because I have felt like this before and at times still do. Any way, good job. Always & 4ever, Grace