Till We Are At The End Of Horizon Comments

As soon as I finished this magnificent poem, I thought of the novel Lost Horizon. There is a quality in your words, Soul, that inspires the search for Shangri-la. Well done.

The journey of life is rotated as a cycle from coldness to hotness or sadness to happiness or vice versa.This poem has been composed relating to this fact on a philosophical base with an introspective eye. It is right to say........ Of good and bad days Till no fears be scared no more Till we brave enough to face We still have seasonal life in heart to wear In our days In our years Beautiful poem. Thanks.

This great poem begins with a sadness reflected by the chill and unfeeling of winter, then slowly transforms with the warming and life giving rays of spring and summer, and ends with understanding and forgiveness and the ever changing patterns of the seasons as reflected in our lives. A very deep and introspective write, my dear friend Soul.

to forget the warm As if fire never exist- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -We are a creature of the present. We often forget the warm memories of the past in the tangles of the present. the trail of hope will return It'll be like a spring that change Maybe it just by a little touch But enough to beautify mind, greening heart Back to nature once again- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I have to tell you how very much I enjoyed this stanza. You kept the poetry flowing so beautifully while making your point. Those days now past as green turned to yellow Like falling leaves from the same tree Like an autumn remedy, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This poem is chock full of really yummy lines, Soul. Very good write! ! ! ! !

Wow so well written, it has rhythm and flow together with the substance, Lovely poem Unwritten Soul..10

boundaries, circles. this much life, we usually have. nice poem

Great piece of writing and a pleasure to read. We never really know what life has planned for us as seasons change our paths.

Dear Sir, Life is full of adventure, , , challenges, , , , mystery, , , , and a journey. Life is beautiful by choice, by chance and how you live your life, work for it to make it worthy. great poem for me. Sincerely, diane

It's a pip to be alive. Well done, ric

Your poemfilled me with such sadness Soul. The healing...the scars.....our choices. Your pen has touched my soul. From your wisdom and the ancient healing power of nature of the changing seasons your poem carries a rhemedy to rehablitate the down hearted.

Like the sumner rain! Nice work.

Wonderful poem addressing the duality of this world in a melodious and poetic way. Living in the now and thinking not too far ahead, a great wisdom. Excellent work, Soul.