Till The Shiny Day Comments
I don't know how and where from i start.
All i want to say is everybody have a dream in their life.
But not all what we want we've get.
Some are come true some are not and mine are related with love for someone to prove how he mean into my life.
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This is good.. But you need to type this up differently.. I love the words and the poem itself though great work Krista
Compact.........lovely.........thoughtful composition... Your first poem, My first 10 and first comment to you! :)
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7/27/2025 4:42:25 AM # 1.0.0
Nice thoughts of a heart in love. Readers understand your emotion and feelings, but there are many spelling and construction errors in the poem, which you would do well to edit, to make the poem nicer.