Till The End Comments

a poignant verses..well narrated..great piece...

The poem flows so well and ver well penned. Keep it up. CP

everyone has got to have there last minutes in this world and join the under world i am writing a peom at school about life and death and i will be putting it on here once i have finished it :) nice peom keep up the good work xx kimberley xx

death.. that's the only reality in life!

very sad this is like that movie 'Lovestory' ++++10 regards anjali

hello dear you rock! What a fine contruction. good work

Lovely..strong emotions flowing through........ After the great grief..there's still someone else around... Great poem..very nice concept...