Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, April 25, 2012

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Rating: 3.7

I tolerated enough of him till last
He was not coming to expectation very fast
I had no other go but to depart
Find some other means to stay away and part
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Neela Nath Das 26 April 2012

Really, to carry on relationship is much important.The voice of Woman is heard very strongly thru this poem.Thanks for inviting me.Great!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 April 2012

Ye You're feeling so DEEP...Love is by default is Painful where it is without expectation...true love filtered thro' strainer of suffering to make Love Matchless great poem Uncle tenner ~ regards ~ niv Please read/comment on 'Sister Don't Give Me Opiate [Drama In Real Life]' and to curb a menace Rape 'I Want To Be Raped' n

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Jason Petersen 25 April 2012

In my mind not a great poem yet many a great truth I found in its rhyme. Thumbs up.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 April 2012

abbylovesm This was great, I enjoyed reading.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 April 2012

I tolerated enough of him till last He was not coming to expectation very fast

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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