Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Till I Shine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before the morning sun,
The voice still calls me hun,
In the morning dew still can run,
My feet cannot stun,
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Renson Opati
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 May 2019

Write comment. Beautiful start, Renson. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2016

Before morning sun voice calls on with expressive love and you shine with sun rays. A marvelous work shared really. Nicely penned poem.10

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Renson Opati 07 January 2016

thank you so much. Al keep it up next time

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