Till I Bid Adieu Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Till I Bid Adieu

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Will you leave me half way through
I am so dependent on you
You know I feel so blue

My love, don't leave me and go
Hold me close to you so
I do not feel so low

This pressure this heart can't take
This burden is too heavy, it aches
Be with me, for my sake

The heavens and the earth belong to you
And I stand in awe of You
Till I bid adieu

Wednesday, December 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 December 2018

When we pray with our sincerest heart to God, He hears always, He helps all the Time, not in our Time but in His Time. I have experienced so many miracles and so did my beloved Mum and my Grand-Mum. Pray whenever you like to pray, tell Him all things in your heart, all the problems, lay all those upon His Feet. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poems, dear Poetes. God's Blessings be perpetually upon you. Sent with a caring heart.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2018

your commitment to God and your devote prayer will be heard. when we pray sincerely from our hearts and open up to the Almighty all our problems, God will hear you.. in the first part of the poem, i thought you are telling everything to your lover and then u turn to God with a twist........ than k u. tony

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