Tuesday, September 3, 2013
Till His Last Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I saw you breathing last
You were sinking very fast
I saw some unfinished thrust
As you smiled at me with trust
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
03 September 2013
ehh Destiny B. Retherford1 minute ago it was okay, i didnt like it very much, but thats just my taste. to others you may be fabulous
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
03 September 2013
I saw you breathing last You were sinking very fast
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8/3/2025 9:27:10 PM # 1.0.0
Re: Till his last (Score: 1) by mac on Wednesday, September 04,2013 (20: 16: 18) It's hard to watch someone die, knowing eventually death will come but not knowing exactly when. mac