Saturday, December 27, 2008

Till Death Do We Part Comments

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Sharply slicing through my skin,
Waiting for blood to begin.
Overpowered by my past,
How will this depression last?
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Amy Fifita
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Sebastine Humaemo 30 December 2008

good one Amy....the lines truly pictures the state of depressed mind....a much matured lines from a growing poet......sebastine

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Eddie Larkin 29 December 2008

I fully identify with the sentiments expressed here; perhaps it is sad from one so young, but nevertheless it is a good thing to write down all your feelings at any age. Always remember Amy, that you are still only 15 and you have your whole life in front of you. Kindest regards, Eddie.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

The knife is not your solution to end your depression but you need times to heal till someones out there is ready to be your other lives! ! ! nice piece Amy.

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