Sunday, May 4, 2008

'Till Death Comments

Rating: 3.7

One by one the steps are taken
One by one our minds awaken
Falling into this Ring of Fire
Giving into our spiritual desire
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Michael Koelliker
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Tyease Collins 14 May 2008

I love the way you did this. The love you feel for this person is so strong, I feel it. Beautiful, **Tyease**

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J Baker 12 May 2008

Very well written. Well done. The composure is very good.

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Amanda Miller 05 May 2008

You are one of the most talented writers i have ever read. your ryhmes are incredible and your message is incredibly deep. i could literally spend hours reading your work. great job!

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Michael Koelliker

Michael Koelliker

Victorville, California
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