Saturday, February 18, 2006

Till Deat And Then On Comments

Rating: 4.3

I remember you standing there
as if you had nothing to fear
With no hate
No seeming torture or sorrow
...
Read full text

Melissa Ferrer
COMMENTS
Trevor Denniss 08 April 2006

As you know Melissa I fully empathise with this and find it very moving. I like the poem very much - keep sharing your inner self with others and you will touch many hearts. 10 pts from me!

0 0 Reply
Charlie Jackson 23 February 2006

I love this poem...it's touching and you should be very proud of your work. Well done!

0 0 Reply
Daniel Tyler 21 February 2006

A very moving poem melissa. Well done.

0 0 Reply
Dan Brown 18 February 2006

A very moving poem on your thoughts and feelings about your sister. You should be proud that you can express your emotions like this, I'm sure she would be. Dan x x

0 0 Reply
Melissa Ferrer

Melissa Ferrer

New York
Close
Error Success