I remember you standing there
as if you had nothing to fear
With no hate
No seeming torture or sorrow
...
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I love this poem...it's touching and you should be very proud of your work. Well done!
A very moving poem on your thoughts and feelings about your sister. You should be proud that you can express your emotions like this, I'm sure she would be. Dan x x
As you know Melissa I fully empathise with this and find it very moving. I like the poem very much - keep sharing your inner self with others and you will touch many hearts. 10 pts from me!