Thursday, May 5, 2016

'Til Love Walked In Comments

Rating: 5.0

She never experienced any true love dreams
.....Nor had any hopes realized
..........That is until you walked on in
And stirred her with your incredible eyes!
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 05 May 2016

Susan, thank you so much. Makes me happy to know that you enjoyed it....think the world needs lots of joy bubbles to kind of neutralize all of it's often angry troubles. You made my day, by the way....thank you, thank you, thank you!

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Susan Williams 05 May 2016

This poem just sparkles with joy! ! ! Love is so heart-wrenching to wait for but when it arrives we are so glad we waited and didn't settle for less. It is not an easy thing to transmit joy through the written media, but you did. I'm just sitting here feeling joyful for no reason other than having just read your joy and shared in it. Thank you for the gift of joy bubbles!

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Theodora Onken 05 May 2016

Edward, thank you so much for reading my words and taking the time to comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Until you walked on in! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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