'Til All My Breath Is You Poem by arqios k

'Til All My Breath Is You

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How have you inked
this palpitant heart?
Well, let me tell you:
Your barbs extend
long and deep and far,
far enough to pierce
skin of my resistance
with needlepoint of
your persistence.
But not only skin
deep; you refuse to
settle for what I
had to offer, deep-
you broke skin and
plunged deeper than
anyone ever did go
pierced right through
very venal lining
polluted my bloodstream
with you insistence
infusing ink of thought
rushing in its onslaught
sucked through mitral 
port into my ventricle
left graffitied and stained
your ink spreading toxin
'til all my breath is you
Such good poison it is too!

Thursday, April 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: ink,poison
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

A love piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction in poetic diction. Definitely a good poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 09 April 2015

A very nicely written poem, Arquious. Thanks for sharing

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