Thursday, October 22, 2020

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Rating: 4.5

Behind closed doors and windows,
We wait patiently,
For things
To get better outside.
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2020

Time ticks amazingly and flower blooms in nice way. We see the watch and flower that falls down outside window. We wait for new blooming patiently. Behind doors and windows we still keep hope alive. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned. This poem is mysterious. Thank you very much for sharing..5 stars..

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Kostas Lagos 23 October 2020

A scent of hope flows through this poem...Excellent

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Khairul Ahsan 23 October 2020

'While the flowers and leaves from pots Quietly drop on the gate outside' - Poignant thoughts!

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