Monday, July 6, 2009

Tightrope Walker Comments

Rating: 5.0

I move above the anxious crowds
in a perilous tightrope act.
With each word I write
every confession & concession made,
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Hunter Dasten
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Binish Cd 15 December 2011

dear friend, this a very fine work. regards binish

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 January 2010

And i congratulate and motivate him to be a tightrope walker with noble experiences---congrats.

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Concetta Neville 29 January 2010

Another amazing poem. very true indeed.10+++

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Claude H Oliver Ii 29 January 2010

Quite true. Good write

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I absolutly love this poem. Can't say too much, for your work speaks for itself here.

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Danielle Guscott 24 July 2009

Great job! Poets are transperant - all our emotions, opinions and thoughts are poured into works and thrown into the public arena for judgement.... bravery is required! Love this poem....

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Tailor Bell 14 July 2009

ah...the circus pedestal of the poet...the tightrope...how appropriate. loved this one. -Tailor

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Sally Carter 09 July 2009

You invited me to look at another poem, but actually I prefer this one. Another great image that you carry through from start to finish. I like this a lot.

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Patrick McFarland 06 July 2009

Well done Hunter. Great insight for one so young.10+

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