You're one step closer to the edge.
One breath closer to the end,
You're walking towards a flower on the ground,
The chains around your ankles keep you bound.
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I read poems in reverse order so this is the third I have
read of yours. I won't say its the best and I won't say its
the worst. But I can say this. You are very young,
you will get much better. But Frankly, in terms of
pure writing in a creative way, you are far ahead
of others your age. You write like someone in their
twenties. Who knows, maybe you are. Either
way. My compliments. I'll nake a note to return.
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I read poems in reverse order so this is the third I have read of yours. I won't say its the best and I won't say its the worst. But I can say this. You are very young, you will get much better. But Frankly, in terms of pure writing in a creative way, you are far ahead of others your age. You write like someone in their twenties. Who knows, maybe you are. Either way. My compliments. I'll nake a note to return.