Friday, February 21, 2014

Tiger, Tiger (Not Kipling) Comments

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Tiger, Tiger, up a tree.
Tiger, Tiger come to me.
Tiger, Tiger locked in a cage.
Tiger, Tiger placed in a rage.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 16 March 2014

the last line was a boo hoo line. (i'm thinking 'death' sleep here) : ( is it the man-eater? ? i like the poem, but what do you think of my idea to have the words.locked and placed switch places? ? just a thought. nice rhyming. a nice little poetic snack! thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Daniel Y. 05 March 2014

Interesting poem. Read one of mine- Nail.

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