the last line was a boo hoo line. (i'm thinking 'death' sleep here) : ( is it the man-eater?
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i like the poem, but what do you think of my idea to have the words.locked and placed switch places? ? just a thought.
nice rhyming. a nice little poetic snack! thanks for sharing. bri :)
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the last line was a boo hoo line. (i'm thinking 'death' sleep here) : ( is it the man-eater? ? i like the poem, but what do you think of my idea to have the words.locked and placed switch places? ? just a thought. nice rhyming. a nice little poetic snack! thanks for sharing. bri :)