Ties Renewed Comments

" our friendship....., flimsy yetweighing worlds" i like the wording but not the foreboding(?) this may signal (for you?) . " our friendship's still intact so we hold hands and now stride into the future vows renewed." This not only sounds much more positive, but it makes me reinterpret the first quote i copied (above) as a positive thought as well. Good! ! bri ;) to MyPoemList