Sunday, February 12, 2023

Tie Your Laces Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your laces are untied
You could trip n' fall
And hurt yourself
So why not just
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D.N. Rebb
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Wannow Wannow 13 February 2023

nice

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 February 2023

Because I bend over Lol Excellent Poem

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2023

A poem so beautifully penned with a powerful message both for children and adults.

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Good. Fantastic expression.

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Jim McGill 12 February 2023

Great poem. Very inspirational.

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Jim McGill 12 February 2023

My cap is cocked at forty-five degrees / With my pants crotch hanging at my knees / My laces can flop ‘round in the breeze / I look cool! So, lee' me alone if you please.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 February 2023

It is a beautiful ink. Loved it.

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