Friday, June 14, 2019

Tides And Troubles Comments

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Kneeling under the span of open sky,
I bent down trying to reach the wet sand,
A fragment of swept-ashore shell in hand,
And wrote upon a patch of beach swept dry—
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2019

A beautiful and touching poem with compelling imagery. " A cure for pain, the sea concurs and.roars" . A wonderful line from a marvelous poem. Superbly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thanks indeed Rose Marie if you have found this sonnet good.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2019

Words of pain! ! Chains of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thank you dear poet, bullet-pointed feedback always takes more time to decipher.

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