Tide, Rising Comments
There is a hunger down in the channels
of my being, somewhere aground
on the tidal shoals of my inward currents,
the slack tide lapping against some
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After the more than generous words you left on my poems I came to see what you've writ and this is the first of yours I've ever read and it is truly high level word imagery. If your others are like this, I'll be following your poetry here for sure. Refreshing to read good poetry here.
poem has all the imagery of a tattered soul....uneven but the journey of dream..unfulfiled yet keeps the desie alive to meet the dream......keep writing.
Thank you, kind poet, for your encouraging and gracious comments. :)
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8/2/2025 2:53:19 PM # 1.0.0
Your descriptive words are quite powerful. I could feel the pain and discomfort of the barnacles. Very nice write. Annette
Hi, Annette. With time, I hope to outgrow the consequences of my younger mistakes, but many of them are still pretty sharp. Thanks, dear, for your ever thoughtful comments. :) S