Sunday, June 11, 2006

Tide Of Emotions Comments

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Water is safe
Its a safe haven
For me.
As water washes over.
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Amy Kerswell
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Dawn Michelle 09 December 2006

ah yes, I love the ocean =) the beach has to be one of my favorite places. I love looking out across the horizon, and dreaming that one day I might follow the sun the disappears so carelessly. The tide is cruel, but so is the world

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***** ********* 11 June 2006

This poem has a wonderfully swaying hypnotic feel to it Amy, just like a calm sea. You describe the waves washing over you so well, just makes me want to throw myself in, body boarding is a favorite water sport of mine. So cooling and the rush is something to be repeated over and over again. You are right those emotions do come back, you just have to stay ahead of the waves. Grinning at you, Tai

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