Tuesday, September 8, 2020

Tidal Woman Comments

Rating: 4.7

Winter fires flare in your eyes
Dance of light up from your aquatic heart
So that the shadows and darkness depart
To faint whale song and dolphin sighs
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Michael Brosky
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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 October 2020

An excellent romantic sonnet, Michael!

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L Milton Hankins 09 September 2020

Another excellent piece of writing, Michael. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Michael Brosky. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Denis Mair 08 September 2020

This poem expresses our need to stand in relation to another person's magnetic presence. It's fascinating how you see the woman in nature and nature in the woman. Her essence cannot be captured, but her aspects appear in our sensory net. I hope to read other aspects of the feminine in your poems.

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