Saturday, May 27, 2017
Tidal Pool Comments
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I am glassy and variable. The life in me
Witnesses a rising and descending roof:
Hinging not only on my own mood but on the Moon's.
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7/29/2025 10:25:23 AM # 1.0.0
" My body lives between rocks - inhabiting their shape." i like the line but would like it better if you used " among/amongst" instead of " between" . check the definition of " between" and you should find the word " two" , as in just two rocks. i wonder if you have any poems which do not hint at your interest in astronomy. bri :)