*ticking Clock Comments

metaphoric! ! ... it's not about the noise, but the flow/wheel of time... every stanza is a symbol of many attempts needed to be made, just to overcome the power of old memories/days... ''Reminding me of the ones I’ve wasted, the tens, the hundreds, the thousands, and of the ones stolen from me, the millions, the billion, the trillions'' this is how short lines can tell a story of being trapped inside the circle of time... it's actually all human beings' dilemma...you simply could express the dual of time & being (in other words: now & here) ... you were so clever that you kept the rhythem of the poem alive with the repeated sound of ''tick-tock, tick-tock''... Bravo, Jane ! ! Good Job ! !