Sunday, September 16, 2012

Ticket Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.8

Would you like visit the stars
What about mercury
Or even mars
There is not that much space between us
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Gwenevere Cornwell 20 September 2012

I really like this poem. It hints at adventures, and I felt like I was joining you on one. Truly briliant.

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Payal Parande 17 September 2012

what a brilliant write sir absolutely entertaining as i was reading you piece with each word i was thinking maybe you do have a power and you will take me out in space and how incredible and brilliant poet you must be to put life into your words well sir you got yourself a fan............ thank you for sharing, love payal

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