Tuesday, May 13, 2014

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The gentleman is waiting for a train in the station
To a journey to the southern most part of the world
When I asked to where he proposed to travel
He shown me his medical records and doctor's opinion
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Dinesan Madathil 14 May 2014

Life is a journey to death and it needs no ticket as none born on the earth can skip that journey.

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Anand Brown 13 May 2014

Lovely poem, good use of narrative skills that serve as to draw in the reader. The poem is open-ended and leaves me burning with questions, so thumbs up for that. Please message me and tell me the reasons behind the return ticket phenomenon in the poem.

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