Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Tick Comments

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We narrowly miss death by the ticking of hands.
One tock sooner and it could’ve been the end.
Is it God’s way of keeping us in check?
Reminding us that this could be our last breath.
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Jason Persilver
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Dave Walker 30 November 2011

Really great poem like it. A good write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Rise The Crow.

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Franklin, Louisiana
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