Thursday, March 2, 2006

Tick Tock, Tick Tock Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tick Tock, Tick Tock,
goes my mothers little clock
sitting on the mantelpiece
time marching to its tempo
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Charles M Moore
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Mary Naylor 03 March 2006

Strong, clock-like beat, subtle, but vivid personification. A very well crafted-poem with an economy of words. It has impact.

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Patricia Gale 03 March 2006

Has it all disapperared? Our has it only just begun? It is what you make of it. Nice write. Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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