Thursday, June 8, 2006

Tick Tock...Tick Tock...Tick Tock Comments

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Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick…
I pass this life by…
Watching the clock…
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Victoria Ritchie
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Pamela lutwyche 04 October 2020

Watching the clock, I used to do that at work. Not now not time to die not yet.

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Bigyan Mainali 04 July 2017

Very depth kept om short way

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Nigel Norton 30 November 2015

Loved it....and read it again just to make sure I had taken it in.

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Kyra Schaneel 21 June 2012

I really like your peom. can i say a suggestion. **only a kind suggestion** for the different ticks it could be like this 1 tick tock tick 2 tock tick tock 3 tick tock tick 4 tock tick tock 5 tick..tick...

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David Darbyshire 08 June 2006

wind it up? ..............................: -)

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