Friday, July 31, 2009

Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock Comments

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Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock
The clock is ticking
Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock
The bell is clanging
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Julia Pascual 04 August 2009

a really good poem.. nice rythm..

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Nashy Lamen 02 August 2009

Very nicely written, . Simple yet expressive.. Continue writting.. As you always do... *haha*

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Danzen D. 31 July 2009

Wonderful use of the ticking sound of the clock...It felt as if the sound was real! While you were speaking there was this faint tick-tock I was hearing.. Nice poem! Keep writing!

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