Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock
The clock is ticking
Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock
The bell is clanging
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Very nicely written, . Simple yet expressive.. Continue writting.. As you always do... *haha*
Wonderful use of the ticking sound of the clock...It felt as if the sound was real! While you were speaking there was this faint tick-tock I was hearing.. Nice poem! Keep writing!
a really good poem.. nice rythm..