deafening night
grandfather's clock
strike at 12 tick tock 
prosthetic valve
                
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Ohh i never seen this mechanical valve though i know about it...now i know how it looks like...thank you :) I like your poem too...i think its sounds great and with great sense behind it, liked it :) keep it up Ging
thank you for dropping by..yes that's how it looks like mechanical valve is inside my heart. :)
You are a bionic, a strong woman that you are now supposed to be! :)

 
                     
                
Nice poem and an unusual subject.
Thank you Christopher :)