Thursday, July 11, 2013

Tick, Tock Comments

Rating: 5.0

This day will be
yesterday some hours
later...
Another day will be added
...
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Neela Nath Das
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Patricia Grantham 13 July 2013

The clock never skips a beat but the heart does. The clock when fall behind can be wound to catch up. Time no waits for no man. Man has to wait on time. Very inspiring.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 July 2013

Wow! Beatiful poem hari, tick, tock, tick, tock...... Siya_! !

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R.j. Wynn 11 July 2013

The beat of time is all the same as that of words, tic tock tic tock, just add or maybe you subtract until you get the beat intact.

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Walterrean Salley 11 July 2013

find time to be intriguing and mysterious. I enjoyed the indepth thoughts you've shared in this composition. Well done.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 July 2013

Beautiful verse for time. Time keeps ticking. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 11 July 2013

A great poem, the one thing we can't stop is time.

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