Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Tick-Tock Comments

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Tick-tock
Time just seems to go straight on by
Tick-tock
Nothing seems to be the same
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Kelsea Osterman
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Kelly Seale 03 October 2012

Time... why you punish me... Hootie n the Blowfish The mundane tick-tock of the clock can drive anyonce nuts when someone is on your mind, and your heart is broken... well penned Kelsea....; -) Kelly.

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Sally Ann Jackson 27 September 2012

Great write obviously a poem from the heart. I think getting your words down helps to make sense of a Situation & helps you to proccess it deal with it Then put it away x

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Adam Reed 26 September 2012

Effective lol it gets the point across ive been there. Im glad someone else wrote something like this but im sorry about the hurtful part. It sucks when thats the inspiration to write.

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Avik Datta Gupta 26 September 2012

HA HA Good One...! Sometimes the guardian of time becomes our worst enemies! ! Very Well Written

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Jerry Hughes 11 September 2012

A tad dramatic Kelsea however, if you really believe life's not worth living end it! Cheers Jerry

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