Friday, April 23, 2010

Tick Tock Comments

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I lay adrift on a wooden raft. Surrounded by the still, black sky of
my mind. Floating on the dark, dimpled water of time. There your face
twinkles above me. You shine. Stars so seemingly close, but
unreachable. The light glowing on my outstretched hands. Clawing at
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Beach Leanbh
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Joseph Macquarrie 29 September 2010

good poem how did u think of this

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