Saturday, November 7, 2009

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Neither bought nor sold
More precious than gold

Flowing endlessly on
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Deborah Downes
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Deborah Cromer 07 November 2009

Very nice. I love how the title and the piece are in union. Good usage of the right words to create a strong message. There is some powerful thought into this and you were able to write it out. Nice piece of work and good job making it work. Debbie

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Deborah Downes

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