Tick Tick Comments

True love! ! Open the door of your heart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Love needs recharging. We must not forget this.10 Robert

This love poem titled 'Tick Tick' has the attractive arena of beginning. It has a metaphorical base too. Stunning expression. Interesting to read. Thank u dear Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10

Very heartfelt poem about tick tick.

(part 3) The exhortation, : : Open the door of your heart : : let me match with your beats: : are no differtent. The line : : You kept me safe in the crystal: : is reflective of the desire, need of a woman to be under the protective cover of her lover. Wonderfully written. Quite sensual. A lovely 100+++

(part 2) But lines that follow are metaphors for something more sublime: sunesuality- : : Close to the wrist : : I keep ticking on your veins: : : : and take me for a tour : : And I will be dead if you don't Charge my cell in between: : The metaphors seem to stand in for something else! ! ! ! ! ! ! (continued)

Hi Rini, Very beautiful poem on love, life and sensuality. : : I am the needle of your wrist watch : : Who is alive day and night for you: : The metaphors of wrist watch and its needle are fully complemented by the following lines: Every second every minute I'm trying to be with you Very Lovely write. - - (continued)