I am the needle of your wrist watch
Who is alive day and night for you
Every second every minute
I'm trying to be with you
Close to the wrist
I keep ticking on your veins
Open the door of your heart
let me match with your beats
You kept me safe in the crystal
and take me for a tour
And I will be dead if you don't
Charge my cell in between
This love poem titled 'Tick Tick' has the attractive arena of beginning. It has a metaphorical base too. Stunning expression. Interesting to read. Thank u dear Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10
(part 3) The exhortation, : : Open the door of your heart : : let me match with your beats: : are no differtent. The line : : You kept me safe in the crystal: : is reflective of the desire, need of a woman to be under the protective cover of her lover. Wonderfully written. Quite sensual. A lovely 100+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
True love! ! Open the door of your heart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Edward for posting your remarks